Personal Experience Writing
Here I go. I’m coming up to the finish line. I can hear the people cheering my name, GO MELISSA!
My little heart is beating as fast as a drum. I slow down but someone passes me so I get some speed and BOOM I’m as fast as lightning. Soon as I know it I am in front. The cheering gets louder. Here I go, faster and faster…. BOOM! I pass the finish line, 1st. I taste victory!
When I get back to the deck my friends congratulate me. Later the next day in assembly I get a trophy. I am so excited that at the end of the day I rush home. When I get into mum’s bedroom I collapse on her bed and when I tell her she almost faints with excitement.
- Melissa
1 comment:
Well Done Melissa!!
What a wonderful piece of writing!! And you have used some wonderful descriptive language in there, that has created a very clear picture in my mind.
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